Monday, 16 February 2015

Suspense Paragraph (Loh Li Kai 19)

I was in the room. I groped around, looking for the switch. "Over here?" Nothing. "Here?" Nothing either. Finally, after what seemed like hours of wandering around in the dark, I found it. "Ah!" I sighed with relief. Just then, I froze. That was when I saw it. A thousand thoughts ran through my mind. I stepped back. It moved forward. For every step I moved backward, it moved forward two steps. Then, after what seemed like hours of terror, it lunged.

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